Herder of the eternally damned

This refers to Dante's poem "Divine comedy" and the seventh circle of hell, specifically; the middle ring. The place reserved for those who have committed suicide.
I'm not religious myself, but the story is hell'a interesting (pun most definitely intended!
I'm currently trying to pick up the pen again after an artblock which felt eternal.
If you could spare the time, comments are always appreciated, be it constructive criticism or words of praise.
thank you